Brianna; your slide show was really awesome and cool. I definitely liked how enthusiastic you were, it really made it seem like you really wanted a car and you deserve one. I also liked all the cars you choose, they were really cool cars and I would like to have a car like that for myself! I think you definitely put out the you are ready to have a car and you deserve one! In a couple places, the words got cut off, and that might need a little fixing, but other than that, you did a really great job!
I worked really hard on this project. It took a lot of effert and a LOT of time! It took a while for me to get all cought up from all my absenses but i got started right away and gave it my all. i have never used publisher before and i though i did GREAT. My brochure had all the information i thought was inportant in my oppinion. In my powerpoint i kept it simple with a general layout and font. I thought the animation i put in my powerpoint made it stand out. The most difficult part of doing the powerpoint is deffinetly the audio. Trying to figure out what i was going to say was difficult and sometimes i wanted to rip myu hair out, but after i was finally done i know now that i did a pretty good job. Something i would change about this is that the animation is pretty much all the same and i would like to go back and add some cool effect in there. Over all i think i did pretty good and i think i am gonna pass
Feed back for Brianna Bek I really love how on slide 12 you really got in to the project. I felt like you were not just reading but explaining. I also like how you kept a steady color pattern through out he entire project it made it all look like part of the same thing. Finally I appreciated how you did not have the pictures appear you added a custom animation. I think that you defiantly completed your purpose. I think that you could have added a little bit more on including your parents. The audio like I said before is fun and exiting it kept me intrigued in your project and was clear for the most part, but on slide 12 it got a little hard to understand. The most important thing that you could do is fix that because otherwise that is a great slide!
I liked your project brianna! It was real awsome. I think that you did a good job on explaining stuff about the cars, you put alot of your own voice into it...I mean alot. The color scheme flowed pretty smoothly, and the custum animation was pretty sweet. I think that your project acomplished it's goal because when you were talking about the car that you wanted you sounded really exited! The Audio was good, you certenly talked loud enough:) I really dont think that you could inprove on anything, it was well put together. But, I think that if you put maybe alittle bit more custom animation into it it would have been even better!
I really liked your project, it was very creative had a great color scheme. I thought you did a good job of explaining the cars. I new what each car looked like and a lot about it by the time the PowerPoint finished. I thought you explained each slide vary well. I liked how you made your voice excided about what you where talking about. I liked the one slide that was about your story I thought that slide was really creative. I think you could have made your slides a little bit more interesting, but other wise I really liked it.
5 comments:
Brianna; your slide show was really awesome and cool. I definitely liked how enthusiastic you were, it really made it seem like you really wanted a car and you deserve one. I also liked all the cars you choose, they were really cool cars and I would like to have a car like that for myself! I think you definitely put out the you are ready to have a car and you deserve one! In a couple places, the words got cut off, and that might need a little fixing, but other than that, you did a really great job!
I worked really hard on this project. It took a lot of effert and a LOT of time! It took a while for me to get all cought up from all my absenses but i got started right away and gave it my all. i have never used publisher before and i though i did GREAT. My brochure had all the information i thought was inportant in my oppinion. In my powerpoint i kept it simple with a general layout and font. I thought the animation i put in my powerpoint made it stand out. The most difficult part of doing the powerpoint is deffinetly the audio. Trying to figure out what i was going to say was difficult and sometimes i wanted to rip myu hair out, but after i was finally done i know now that i did a pretty good job. Something i would change about this is that the animation is pretty much all the same and i would like to go back and add some cool effect in there. Over all i think i did pretty good and i think i am gonna pass
Feed back for Brianna Bek
I really love how on slide 12 you really got in to the project. I felt like you were not just reading but explaining. I also like how you kept a steady color pattern through out he entire project it made it all look like part of the same thing. Finally I appreciated how you did not have the pictures appear you added a custom animation. I think that you defiantly completed your purpose. I think that you could have added a little bit more on including your parents. The audio like I said before is fun and exiting it kept me intrigued in your project and was clear for the most part, but on slide 12 it got a little hard to understand. The most important thing that you could do is fix that because otherwise that is a great slide!
I liked your project brianna! It was real awsome. I think that you did a good job on explaining stuff about the cars, you put alot of your own voice into it...I mean alot. The color scheme flowed pretty smoothly, and the custum animation was pretty sweet. I think that your project acomplished it's goal because when you were talking about the car that you wanted you sounded really exited! The Audio was good, you certenly talked loud enough:) I really dont think that you could inprove on anything, it was well put together. But, I think that if you put maybe alittle bit more custom animation into it it would have been even better!
I really liked your project, it was very creative had a great color scheme. I thought you did a good job of explaining the cars. I new what each car looked like and a lot about it by the time the PowerPoint finished. I thought you explained each slide vary well. I liked how you made your voice excided about what you where talking about. I liked the one slide that was about your story I thought that slide was really creative. I think you could have made your slides a little bit more interesting, but other wise I really liked it.
Post a Comment