I tried to make my title to the point but at the same time I wanted to “hook” the reader into seeing what kind of car that I wanted. My brochure didn’t turn out as good as I wanted it to, I had an ugly line that distracted the reader, I probably should have just made I larger to show more detail and information. I really enjoyed working in PowerPoint because it was fun with all the designs that I could do, and it was endless possibilities with my pics and sounds. I really enjoyed custom animation, it takes a while to find which animations I like and that flow together but in the end I thought that it was worth it. Putting music and having me talk in the project was a cool experience because I think that adding that really added a personal touch to my project. The recordings didn’t really go so well because it wouldn’t really time it right which was a bummer. The most difficult part of this whole project was getting all of the info for the cars. I thought that I did pretty well but that I could have been more creative. I had a lot of time to do this and I used just about every minute that I could. I wish that I could spend a little more time on it though. I think that if I showed this to my parents they would be impressed and hopefully get the car that I wanted. Thanks for watching.
I thought that your presentation was great. I really think that your animation was top notch it was amazing. I really liked the thing with curtain I thought that you did well with the audio on that piece. I also thought your brochure was cool it was an interesting picture of you and I would buy that Batman Bike. I like that you put the whole thing in stages it made it look more important than it was which was good. I really think that if your parents saw this they would buy you a car now it was great. The audio was very clear and I enjoyed the audio on the curtain slide. One thing you could of done to improve it was to get a little better color scheme. GOOD JOB!!!!
Feedback: Chad, I really liked your voice recordings. I think that what you did was really funny. And definitely I like what you called the money “buckaroos”. That was sweet! Good job on the animations, I think that they were creative, but at the same time they were some normal ones. Your audio cut off sometimes but other wise I could understand ever thing else. Your colors were really good when each time you have a different back ground. I think that your parents will understand what car you want and the good things about that car. I enjoyed it and I think that you did a good job.
I really liked your presentation. I liked the color schemes, and how the ever all effect of it was. I thought you did well on finding cars that suit your personality. Also, I liked how you were acting like you. The goal was reached and I believe it would have convinced your parents. Your audio cut you off towards the end of the presentation. The recording was great. I could understand it and the whole thing sounded amazing. The thing you could have done better in your project was using different animations to make it seem like you don’t know what is coming next. Make it some mystery. But I liked it a lot.
I thought that your PowerPoint was well constructed. On the slides with the cars on them your voice seemed to cut out on every one near the end of the slides. Your audio was done very well and I like how you did the slide were you chose the car. I thought that the title could use some work and I like the way you made the cars come up. I thought that your Powersport brochure was made really well, and the picture you edited in Photoshop was great. The color scheme needed a bit of work, it didn’t really work well on the slides were you put a washed out logo of the car.
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I tried to make my title to the point but at the same time I wanted to “hook” the reader into seeing what kind of car that I wanted. My brochure didn’t turn out as good as I wanted it to, I had an ugly line that distracted the reader, I probably should have just made I larger to show more detail and information. I really enjoyed working in PowerPoint because it was fun with all the designs that I could do, and it was endless possibilities with my pics and sounds. I really enjoyed custom animation, it takes a while to find which animations I like and that flow together but in the end I thought that it was worth it. Putting music and having me talk in the project was a cool experience because I think that adding that really added a personal touch to my project. The recordings didn’t really go so well because it wouldn’t really time it right which was a bummer. The most difficult part of this whole project was getting all of the info for the cars. I thought that I did pretty well but that I could have been more creative. I had a lot of time to do this and I used just about every minute that I could. I wish that I could spend a little more time on it though. I think that if I showed this to my parents they would be impressed and hopefully get the car that I wanted. Thanks for watching.
I thought that your presentation was great. I really think that your animation was top notch it was amazing. I really liked the thing with curtain I thought that you did well with the audio on that piece. I also thought your brochure was cool it was an interesting picture of you and I would buy that Batman Bike. I like that you put the whole thing in stages it made it look more important than it was which was good. I really think that if your parents saw this they would buy you a car now it was great. The audio was very clear and I enjoyed the audio on the curtain slide. One thing you could of done to improve it was to get a little better color scheme. GOOD JOB!!!!
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Chad, I really liked your voice recordings. I think that what you did was really funny. And definitely I like what you called the money “buckaroos”. That was sweet! Good job on the animations, I think that they were creative, but at the same time they were some normal ones. Your audio cut off sometimes but other wise I could understand ever thing else. Your colors were really good when each time you have a different back ground. I think that your parents will understand what car you want and the good things about that car. I enjoyed it and I think that you did a good job.
I really liked your presentation. I liked the color schemes, and how the ever all effect of it was. I thought you did well on finding cars that suit your personality. Also, I liked how you were acting like you. The goal was reached and I believe it would have convinced your parents. Your audio cut you off towards the end of the presentation. The recording was great. I could understand it and the whole thing sounded amazing. The thing you could have done better in your project was using different animations to make it seem like you don’t know what is coming next. Make it some mystery. But I liked it a lot.
I thought that your PowerPoint was well constructed. On the slides with the cars on them your voice seemed to cut out on every one near the end of the slides. Your audio was done very well and I like how you did the slide were you chose the car. I thought that the title could use some work and I like the way you made the cars come up. I thought that your Powersport brochure was made really well, and the picture you edited in Photoshop was great. The color scheme needed a bit of work, it didn’t really work well on the slides were you put a washed out logo of the car.
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