Your power point was great. Everything was great. The animations were one of the many of my favorite things. The timing was right, there were different animations, and they were good and cool. The word art was also well done and well made. When your parents see this they will be happy and let you buy the car you want because the power point was great. A couple things one could work on is you could talk more during you power point slides and not say what is written on the power point slides. But over all your power point was great.
First off, this project took me forever so I hope you like it. The title for my show wasn’t that hard to come up with, after all the day you turn 16 is destined to be one of the happiest days of your life, so that’s why the title was so easy to make. I think that my brochure turned out ok, but the colors I used on the brochure didn’t match the ones on my slide show. I think that I learned a lot by using PowerPoint again this year. I got my color scheme by from my second slide (letter to parents). I found recording your voice harder than it looks because you mess up and say the wrong thing, and then you have to go back and fix it all. The most difficult piece of this project would have to be the slide where I tell you which car I decided to get. The things I think I did well are the colors, how they all matched except the brochure, the narration, except my voice sounds kind of weird, the transitions, how I did different ones for each slide (or I tried to ), and my information, because my parents are all about the facts and they would want to know everything they could about the car I chose. The things that didn’t turn out as well as I thought they would were the narration because I was sick and my voice was sounding weird. I think I managed my time ok; I spent a lot of time with the background colors and the animation, yeah that took a while to complete. I think that, if I showed my parents this, I would have convinced them that the car I chose was the car to buy. Thank you for viewing my slide show and I really hope you enjoyed it, it took me a lot of time and hard work.
Three things I liked about your PowerPoint are your choice of colors, your custom animation, and your pictures. Your choice of colors made the PowerPoint look really good and enjoyable to watch, your custom animation went by smoothly and looked great, and your pictures, like the one you used for 16 in slide 2, went real well with whatever was in the slide. Your voice could be a bit louder, and that’s the only problem I have with it. I think you sounded a lot like you were talking to your parents, especially from the letter you put in slide 2. One thing I would change is to put some voice in the picture slides; they get kind of boring. Overall, I would say this project deserves a pretty good grade.
I really liked your PowerPoint. The three things that I liked in your PowerPoint was your ending for your car that you wanted was cool. Your clip art was cool, and your color schemes were also cool. I think that you did a good job in having your mom and dad get the car that you wanted. The recording that you did was good, but if you put some more fun and exciting voice into it, it would have been better. One thing that you could have improved on is putting some more information on each car. All in all, I think that you did great!
I liked the colors and clip art on the first slides, the credits, and the animation on the last slide. You could have talked a little clearer, use more colors, and make them go with the cars you chose. I think you convinced your parents that you wanted your car. Your custom animation was good, especially on the last slide before the credits. I think you worked really hard on the slide show and the letter to your parents was a really good idea. Your slide show was very original.
i really liked the colorfull slides, it added alot to the power point. it was a GREAT power point. the custom animation was a fun little extrs to the slides. i think something you could work on is not repeating the same thing for what you liked on the cars. Also be more exited about what you are talking about. i liked it over all though
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Your power point was great. Everything was great. The animations were one of the many of my favorite things. The timing was right, there were different animations, and they were good and cool. The word art was also well done and well made. When your parents see this they will be happy and let you buy the car you want because the power point was great. A couple things one could work on is you could talk more during you power point slides and not say what is written on the power point slides. But over all your power point was great.
First off, this project took me forever so I hope you like it. The title for my show wasn’t that hard to come up with, after all the day you turn 16 is destined to be one of the happiest days of your life, so that’s why the title was so easy to make. I think that my brochure turned out ok, but the colors I used on the brochure didn’t match the ones on my slide show. I think that I learned a lot by using PowerPoint again this year. I got my color scheme by from my second slide (letter to parents). I found recording your voice harder than it looks because you mess up and say the wrong thing, and then you have to go back and fix it all. The most difficult piece of this project would have to be the slide where I tell you which car I decided to get. The things I think I did well are the colors, how they all matched except the brochure, the narration, except my voice sounds kind of weird, the transitions, how I did different ones for each slide (or I tried to ), and my information, because my parents are all about the facts and they would want to know everything they could about the car I chose. The things that didn’t turn out as well as I thought they would were the narration because I was sick and my voice was sounding weird. I think I managed my time ok; I spent a lot of time with the background colors and the animation, yeah that took a while to complete. I think that, if I showed my parents this, I would have convinced them that the car I chose was the car to buy. Thank you for viewing my slide show and I really hope you enjoyed it, it took me a lot of time and hard work.
---Sydney
Three things I liked about your PowerPoint are your choice of colors, your custom animation, and your pictures. Your choice of colors made the PowerPoint look really good and enjoyable to watch, your custom animation went by smoothly and looked great, and your pictures, like the one you used for 16 in slide 2, went real well with whatever was in the slide. Your voice could be a bit louder, and that’s the only problem I have with it. I think you sounded a lot like you were talking to your parents, especially from the letter you put in slide 2. One thing I would change is to put some voice in the picture slides; they get kind of boring. Overall, I would say this project deserves a pretty good grade.
I really liked your PowerPoint. The three things that I liked in your PowerPoint was your ending for your car that you wanted was cool. Your clip art was cool, and your color schemes were also cool. I think that you did a good job in having your mom and dad get the car that you wanted. The recording that you did was good, but if you put some more fun and exciting voice into it, it would have been better. One thing that you could have improved on is putting some more information on each car. All in all, I think that you did great!
I liked the colors and clip art on the first slides, the credits, and the animation on the last slide. You could have talked a little clearer, use more colors, and make them go with the cars you chose. I think you convinced your parents that you wanted your car. Your custom animation was good, especially on the last slide before the credits. I think you worked really hard on the slide show and the letter to your parents was a really good idea. Your slide show was very original.
i really liked the colorfull slides, it added alot to the power point. it was a GREAT power point. the custom animation was a fun little extrs to the slides. i think something you could work on is not repeating the same thing for what you liked on the cars. Also be more exited about what you are talking about. i liked it over all though
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