I thought that your PowerPoint was well made. You had a creative title that wanted me to find out more about your cars, but what’s with having all four of them being Cameros?? Your color scheme was well thought out and how you put your self into one of the cars was amazing. I thought that the audio was well done to, you did have some cut-offs but it was still a great job. Your animations were a bit limited but when you did have them they were amazing, defiantly try to do some more on your next PowerPoint! GREAT JOB!!
I liked your project I thought it was pretty good and there a few things I really liked about it. Number one is your brochure I thought it was really good I liked your Photoshop picture that was funny. I also liked the way you picked the car it was interesting the way you used the lines to make the X and stuff like that. I also liked the credit slide even though it was a little long it was good. I think this project did get the point across you did not really go all out with the car choices and you stuck to the same brand and car type. Your audio was good but it did cut off a little. One thing you could do to improve was to put the brochure slide before the first car.
To make my intro slide interesting I made all the letters in the words come up separately and move around to form my name at the end, I also put pictures of my cars with me in them. I feel like my publisher brochure turned out good. I think that the layout and the color scheme work well with what I was selling. I have used PowerPoint in a number of projects but I never had to do an audio narration, so I think that that was the hardest part of the PowerPoint. I feel like all my animations were good and that I got my color scheme down. The narration didn’t turn out as good as the PowerPoint and I feel like it ruined the whole PowerPoint. I would have put music through out the whole PowerPoint instead of a narration. I wasted a lot of time on my first slide and it still didn’t turn out as good as I wanted, the letters didn’t move and show up as smoothly as I wanted. I also I kept changing cars because some of them didn’t have an engine in it. One of the cars I chose was just the frame of the car. To improve my time I could have made sure that the cars ran and had engines. I think that the goal of the project went through and I could have gotten my parents to let me buy the car if I did a bit more research about the cars. This project was a great learning experience for me.
Feedback: Austin, I really thought that it was funny at first on your first slide were there was you in the car with your messed up face…Car 1 I don’t think you did but did u put the bottle in the car when you put it up or did you add it in Photoshop? And that was really funny when the ship blew the horn and then I see a cruise ship. That would be awesome if you got that as your car! I think that you could of improved on the animations and backgrounds, but other wise I really liked it! I think that you got the point across and good job!
I liked the way you put your presentation together. It was well thought out and you had a great variety of cars... even though they were all Cameros. I also liked the colors you used and the way they all went together. I think you met the goal for trying to get a car. I think the audio wasn’t the best. It cut you off a little… but everybody’s did too. It was good, and easily understandable. The thing you could have worked on more was the animations. They were good, but they were sort of expected. I liked your presentation a lot though. Great job.
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I thought that your PowerPoint was well made. You had a creative title that wanted me to find out more about your cars, but what’s with having all four of them being Cameros??
Your color scheme was well thought out and how you put your self into one of the cars was amazing. I thought that the audio was well done to, you did have some cut-offs but it was still a great job. Your animations were a bit limited but when you did have them they were amazing, defiantly try to do some more on your next PowerPoint! GREAT JOB!!
I liked your project I thought it was pretty good and there a few things I really liked about it. Number one is your brochure I thought it was really good I liked your Photoshop picture that was funny. I also liked the way you picked the car it was interesting the way you used the lines to make the X and stuff like that. I also liked the credit slide even though it was a little long it was good. I think this project did get the point across you did not really go all out with the car choices and you stuck to the same brand and car type. Your audio was good but it did cut off a little. One thing you could do to improve was to put the brochure slide before the first car.
To make my intro slide interesting I made all the letters in the words come up separately and move around to form my name at the end, I also put pictures of my cars with me in them. I feel like my publisher brochure turned out good. I think that the layout and the color scheme work well with what I was selling. I have used PowerPoint in a number of projects but I never had to do an audio narration, so I think that that was the hardest part of the PowerPoint. I feel like all my animations were good and that I got my color scheme down. The narration didn’t turn out as good as the PowerPoint and I feel like it ruined the whole PowerPoint. I would have put music through out the whole PowerPoint instead of a narration. I wasted a lot of time on my first slide and it still didn’t turn out as good as I wanted, the letters didn’t move and show up as smoothly as I wanted. I also I kept changing cars because some of them didn’t have an engine in it. One of the cars I chose was just the frame of the car. To improve my time I could have made sure that the cars ran and had engines. I think that the goal of the project went through and I could have gotten my parents to let me buy the car if I did a bit more research about the cars. This project was a great learning experience for me.
Feedback:
Austin, I really thought that it was funny at first on your first slide were there was you in the car with your messed up face…Car 1 I don’t think you did but did u put the bottle in the car when you put it up or did you add it in Photoshop? And that was really funny when the ship blew the horn and then I see a cruise ship. That would be awesome if you got that as your car! I think that you could of improved on the animations and backgrounds, but other wise I really liked it! I think that you got the point across and good job!
I liked the way you put your presentation together. It was well thought out and you had a great variety of cars... even though they were all Cameros. I also liked the colors you used and the way they all went together. I think you met the goal for trying to get a car. I think the audio wasn’t the best. It cut you off a little… but everybody’s did too. It was good, and easily understandable. The thing you could have worked on more was the animations. They were good, but they were sort of expected. I liked your presentation a lot though. Great job.
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