Kierra: Kierra I really like your project. What I really like about your car project is that you had good colors. Your slides had good info shown on slides 6, 9, 12, and 15. The third thing wad that your audio was good it was so I could hear it not to loud. I thought that you point did get across you are ready to drive and that you want that that you picked. Your audio was good like I said before it was not too loud but s little to quite for me. Some things that you could approve on are you could make your voice a little louder and you could say a little more on what you were talking about.
Kierra- I really liked your power point presentation, one of the main reasons why is because of your audio. I thought it wasn’t loud, but it wasn’t too soft, which made it enjoyable to watch and to listen to. I also really liked your transition slides. Like the bubbles, they were really, really cool. I also thought that your color scheme was very, very, well planned out on slides, 6, 9, 12, and 15. I really do think that the point got across to the audience that she wants this car and she has good reasons as to why. The audio was okay, it was a little soft but not to loud which was good. There was no music on the credits slide.
I thought your PowerPoint was pretty cool! Nice job! Three things I liked about your PowerPoint where the credits how you had the cars cut out and drive across the page, the Thunderbird slide because I thought it had a really nice color scheme and all together it looked nice. I also liked the jeep slide because the font was nice and so where the colors. I also liked the Packard slide because the pictures where in sepia and the car was old so it really made it all flow together. It was also cool how at the end of the credits the car you choose got really big because it added emphasis. I think your project accomplished the goal of convincing your parents that you’re ready for a car. Your audio was good besides at some points it was a little quiet and at the “the end” slide it kind of cut you off, but other that that everything was good. One thing that could’ve been done to improve the projects would’ve been to maybe make your table of contents and intro the same color but other than that I think that your project turned out really good!
To make my introduction slide really interesting I added custom animation, audio and I tried to make my slide have a good color scheme. The brochure I made I thought turned out pretty well. The layout design was okay and the color scheme went pretty good together I thought. I had fun making my slideshow I had a good experience with PowerPoint. The audio was fun to do and I think it made all of the slideshows way more interesting and fun along with the animation. But some of the animation was hard like trying to get the timing perfect. The thing I thought was the most difficult thing for me to do in my slideshow was my credit slide. It was hard because the animation. It wasn’t too hard and I managed to do it but the timing on it was difficult and it took me a while. But the rest went pretty well and I didn’t have any trouble with anything else. So overall I think my project wasn’t too bad and I did pretty well. Even though I had trouble with the timing with the credit slide it turned out good. I think I could have done the audio better though. Chelsea said I needed to speak louder and I agree I could have. But I think if I showed my parents this I think they would be persuaded enough to let me buy my first car! At least I hope so cause if they don’t I did all this hard work for nothing but that’s okay cause I had fun doing it.
Kierra, I thought your transitions were fun to see how they all came together. The overall color in your project went well with the cars that you had chosen. The cars were wisely chosen because I could tell that you chose them with a lot of thought like “What cars should I choose?” Some things you could tweak a bit are projecting your voice so you can be clearly heard. You could also tweak some of the transitions, because I thought they repeated just a little too much. Other than those small details, this is one of the best PowerPoint presentations that I have seen.
Three things I liked about your presentation where the table of contents, the tables on slides 7, 8, 9 and 10, and the custom animation. The custom animation on your credits slide was pretty cool because you had a lot of things coming and going and the guy in the car “talking” at the end. Although you had a very good PowerPoint it didn’t seem like you where trying to convince your parents you where ready for a car. Your audio was very loud but at some parts it was hard to hear what you where saying. The most important thing you could’ve done to improve your project would’ve been to add more information and pictures on the car slides. Good job on your PowerPoint!
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Kierra: Kierra I really like your project. What I really like about your car project is that you had good colors. Your slides had good info shown on slides 6, 9, 12, and 15. The third thing wad that your audio was good it was so I could hear it not to loud. I thought that you point did get across you are ready to drive and that you want that that you picked. Your audio was good like I said before it was not too loud but s little to quite for me. Some things that you could approve on are you could make your voice a little louder and you could say a little more on what you were talking about.
Kierra- I really liked your power point presentation, one of the main reasons why is because of your audio. I thought it wasn’t loud, but it wasn’t too soft, which made it enjoyable to watch and to listen to. I also really liked your transition slides. Like the bubbles, they were really, really cool. I also thought that your color scheme was very, very, well planned out on slides, 6, 9, 12, and 15. I really do think that the point got across to the audience that she wants this car and she has good reasons as to why. The audio was okay, it was a little soft but not to loud which was good. There was no music on the credits slide.
I thought your PowerPoint was pretty cool! Nice job! Three things I liked about your PowerPoint where the credits how you had the cars cut out and drive across the page, the Thunderbird slide because I thought it had a really nice color scheme and all together it looked nice. I also liked the jeep slide because the font was nice and so where the colors. I also liked the Packard slide because the pictures where in sepia and the car was old so it really made it all flow together. It was also cool how at the end of the credits the car you choose got really big because it added emphasis. I think your project accomplished the goal of convincing your parents that you’re ready for a car. Your audio was good besides at some points it was a little quiet and at the “the end” slide it kind of cut you off, but other that that everything was good. One thing that could’ve been done to improve the projects would’ve been to maybe make your table of contents and intro the same color but other than that I think that your project turned out really good!
To make my introduction slide really interesting I added custom animation, audio and I tried to make my slide have a good color scheme. The brochure I made I thought turned out pretty well. The layout design was okay and the color scheme went pretty good together I thought. I had fun making my slideshow I had a good experience with PowerPoint. The audio was fun to do and I think it made all of the slideshows way more interesting and fun along with the animation. But some of the animation was hard like trying to get the timing perfect. The thing I thought was the most difficult thing for me to do in my slideshow was my credit slide. It was hard because the animation. It wasn’t too hard and I managed to do it but the timing on it was difficult and it took me a while. But the rest went pretty well and I didn’t have any trouble with anything else. So overall I think my project wasn’t too bad and I did pretty well. Even though I had trouble with the timing with the credit slide it turned out good. I think I could have done the audio better though. Chelsea said I needed to speak louder and I agree I could have. But I think if I showed my parents this I think they would be persuaded enough to let me buy my first car! At least I hope so cause if they don’t I did all this hard work for nothing but that’s okay cause I had fun doing it.
Kierra, I thought your transitions were fun to see how they all came together. The overall color in your project went well with the cars that you had chosen. The cars were wisely chosen because I could tell that you chose them with a lot of thought like “What cars should I choose?” Some things you could tweak a bit are projecting your voice so you can be clearly heard. You could also tweak some of the transitions, because I thought they repeated just a little too much. Other than those small details, this is one of the best PowerPoint presentations that I have seen.
Three things I liked about your presentation where the table of contents, the tables on slides 7, 8, 9 and 10, and the custom animation. The custom animation on your credits slide was pretty cool because you had a lot of things coming and going and the guy in the car “talking” at the end. Although you had a very good PowerPoint it didn’t seem like you where trying to convince your parents you where ready for a car. Your audio was very loud but at some parts it was hard to hear what you where saying. The most important thing you could’ve done to improve your project would’ve been to add more information and pictures on the car slides. Good job on your PowerPoint!
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