Iain, that PowerPoint was very interesting, but I liked it. I thought you chose well on the cars, and they were cool. My favorite was probably the hummer, because it was golden and I like the color gold. The animation was really nice, and I liked it for the third car pictures. I think you did a good job on giving me the full idea and picture. Your narration was a bit stuttered, but overall it was pretty good. You will definitely convince your parents to help you get that car you wanted, that is, if they ever see it.
I thought that they were all great. Of right now I’m thinking how all full mine was. I forgot my I chose slide. I also feel I went over board with my custom animation and that my credits should have been loger. Ow and if your wondering about the “Go Spore” I was going to put in a video from it but ran out of time. I realy thought that if I was presenting to my parents I would have conviced them. I actaly tried to get them to let me buy that jeep. The only things I would change would be to have more time. I really wanted to add that video. But I cant figeur out how to get them out of my game. I really felt I l learned a lot of stuff about power point and new ways to use things. I Poblely would have ben able to put that video if I was’t adited to cust om animation. I cant wate to use this stuff next year. Power point gives you a lot of simple tools but if you use them right you can make amasing things . Im now tring a new tecniuc were I use a lot of cucstoanimashion.
Ian I thought your PowerPoint was really good I liked how you matched your background and text colors with your cars and how you did the spot light with the words on your car slide and on your credit slide was a really cool idea. Your animations were good too. I think your parents got that you are ready and responsible enough for a car. Your audio was ok; you talked clearly and were fairly easy to understand, but you stuttered in some parts. The only thing you could work on is just try to think about what your saying and say it slowly then you’ll be easier to understand.
Iain, I thought that your power point was not too bad. Your animations where very good. They made sense and they where very well timed and coordinated. One big thing that was a flaw was the actual info. You spend a little to much time on animations and didn’t focus much on the writing on it. When it was car three you wrote car two. I did think you kept a good flow in your speech. It was well timed also with the animations you had. Next time I think you could slow down on the speech for future use. Then next PowerPoint you do will sound much better and make a little more sense.
The slide layout was amazing and so was your narration, you timed it perfectly. I also liked the way that you got the message out to your parents and the car you chose. Great job Ian, this I have to say it was one of the best in our group, I loved it. I know I have already said this but your narration was amazing, it was the best part. I hope that you will keep doing this and never stop making PowerPoint’s. You have a lot of potential. I have said this but never stop these are really cool projects that you are making.
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Iain, that PowerPoint was very interesting, but I liked it. I thought you chose well on the cars, and they were cool. My favorite was probably the hummer, because it was golden and I like the color gold. The animation was really nice, and I liked it for the third car pictures. I think you did a good job on giving me the full idea and picture. Your narration was a bit stuttered, but overall it was pretty good. You will definitely convince your parents to help you get that car you wanted, that is, if they ever see it.
I thought that they were all great. Of right now I’m thinking how all full mine was. I forgot my I chose slide. I also feel I went over board with my custom animation and that my credits should have been loger. Ow and if your wondering about the “Go Spore” I was going to put in a video from it but ran out of time. I realy thought that if I was presenting to my parents I would have conviced them. I actaly tried to get them to let me buy that jeep.
The only things I would change would be to have more time. I really wanted to add that video. But I cant figeur out how to get them out of my game. I really felt I l learned a lot of stuff about power point and new ways to use things. I Poblely would have ben able to put that video if I was’t adited to cust om animation. I cant wate to use this stuff next year. Power point gives you a lot of simple tools but if you use them right you can make amasing things . Im now tring a new tecniuc were I use a lot of cucstoanimashion.
Ian I thought your PowerPoint was really good I liked how you matched your background and text colors with your cars and how you did the spot light with the words on your car slide and on your credit slide was a really cool idea. Your animations were good too. I think your parents got that you are ready and responsible enough for a car. Your audio was ok; you talked clearly and were fairly easy to understand, but you stuttered in some parts. The only thing you could work on is just try to think about what your saying and say it slowly then you’ll be easier to understand.
Iain, I thought that your power point was not too bad. Your animations where very good. They made sense and they where very well timed and coordinated. One big thing that was a flaw was the actual info. You spend a little to much time on animations and didn’t focus much on the writing on it. When it was car three you wrote car two. I did think you kept a good flow in your speech. It was well timed also with the animations you had. Next time I think you could slow down on the speech for future use. Then next PowerPoint you do will sound much better and make a little more sense.
The slide layout was amazing and so was your narration, you timed it perfectly. I also liked the way that you got the message out to your parents and the car you chose. Great job Ian, this I have to say it was one of the best in our group, I loved it. I know I have already said this but your narration was amazing, it was the best part. I hope that you will keep doing this and never stop making PowerPoint’s. You have a lot of potential. I have said this but never stop these are really cool projects that you are making.
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