Lauren, I thought your PowerPoint was very well planned and interesting, the effects were nice and my favorite part of the project was the way you explained the cars was really awesome! I especially liked the way you showed the inside of the cars. Some things I think you should improve on are the narration, because it cut off at some parts, anyway, you had good car choices, like the beetle! I love those things. Otherwise those other cars you chose I would’ve picked if you were selling them. I think you will get that car you chose, because you explained the car’s features perfectly.
I like the color coronation is really nice also the font is a nice and clear and the details in the background are nice they stand out. I think it gave a lot of info that is needed to help convince your parent to get the car you want but I am not shier if it would convince your them or not. I think you need to improve on the animation and audio I think that it needs a little work you need to talk a bit louder and clearer. The animation is ok but you need a little more.
To make intro slide interesting I made a table of contents which I thought was cool because of all the hyperlinks. The title could have been more interesting but I was just really trying to stretch the fact that since I was 16 I needed a car. I didn’t think that my brochure could have turned out better because I thought my layout wasn’t as good as it could have been because I got confused on the front and the back but other than that I thought my color scheme was good. In PowerPoint I think I did pretty well on the color scheme was consistent during the whole thing and the layout didn’t have any problems with layout either, but my animation and audio were pretty lame. The hardest part of the project was time management for me because I was sick for a couple of days. My project was good with a few rough edges. If I could redo it there would be more time spent on the narration and animation than layout and design. I thought in the end that I reached the goal of convincing my parents that I’m ready to buy a car now that I’m 16. I think I was to busy trying to put in all the cool features of my project that I didn’t have enough time with the audio and animation, but I’m glad there were some problems that happened because it was a good learning experience. I got a lot of information and skills from this project that I can apply to my next assignment.
Great project Lauren, it was insane I loved your color scheme, narration, and custom animation. Your color scheme was consistent and amazing. Your narration was timed perfectly and the slides flew with it. And your custom animation was the best out of our entire group, it really popped and was an eye –opener and was a great introduction to the current slide that the person was on. I hope that you never stop making such great projects and PowerPoint’s. This project was awesome never stop making them, and I am serious. They are awesome projects and I hope that you keep pursuing your dreams.
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Lauren, I thought your PowerPoint was very well planned and interesting, the effects were nice and my favorite part of the project was the way you explained the cars was really awesome! I especially liked the way you showed the inside of the cars. Some things I think you should improve on are the narration, because it cut off at some parts, anyway, you had good car choices, like the beetle! I love those things. Otherwise those other cars you chose I would’ve picked if you were selling them. I think you will get that car you chose, because you explained the car’s features perfectly.
I like the color coronation is really nice also the font is a nice and clear and the details in the background are nice they stand out. I think it gave a lot of info that is needed to help convince your parent to get the car you want but I am not shier if it would convince your them or not. I think you need to improve on the animation and audio I think that it needs a little work you need to talk a bit louder and clearer. The animation is ok but you need a little more.
To make intro slide interesting I made a table of contents which I thought was cool because of all the hyperlinks. The title could have been more interesting but I was just really trying to stretch the fact that since I was 16 I needed a car. I didn’t think that my brochure could have turned out better because I thought my layout wasn’t as good as it could have been because I got confused on the front and the back but other than that I thought my color scheme was good. In PowerPoint I think I did pretty well on the color scheme was consistent during the whole thing and the layout didn’t have any problems with layout either, but my animation and audio were pretty lame. The hardest part of the project was time management for me because I was sick for a couple of days. My project was good with a few rough edges. If I could redo it there would be more time spent on the narration and animation than layout and design. I thought in the end that I reached the goal of convincing my parents that I’m ready to buy a car now that I’m 16. I think I was to busy trying to put in all the cool features of my project that I didn’t have enough time with the audio and animation, but I’m glad there were some problems that happened because it was a good learning experience. I got a lot of information and skills from this project that I can apply to my next assignment.
Great project Lauren, it was insane I loved your color scheme, narration, and custom animation. Your color scheme was consistent and amazing. Your narration was timed perfectly and the slides flew with it. And your custom animation was the best out of our entire group, it really popped and was an eye –opener and was a great introduction to the current slide that the person was on. I hope that you never stop making such great projects and PowerPoint’s. This project was awesome never stop making them, and I am serious. They are awesome projects and I hope that you keep pursuing your dreams.
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