Your power point was well done. The animations were great. I like it when the cars would come in and go out. Also I liked the colors. They were really bright and cool. The bright made me more interested and paid attention more. There are some things you could work on. The first thing is as the words come up you are reading them. You could talk about something else when we are reading. Also the colors were good but the color scheme did not match that well. But over all the power point, the voice, and the four cars were well put together. That was a great power point.
I made my project’s title interesting by using bright colors and thick lines around the pictures. I liked my brochure, but it was hard to figure out what to put on it, but I feel my lay out and color scheme were good. I liked using power point because there are many possibilities and ways to make a cool power point. I used lots of color while still keeping the color scheme looking good. I think custom animation and clip art made my power point look a lot better too. I used animation to add fun and clip art to help the color scheme. I didn’t like narrating the power point because I didn’t know what to say about the cars. I like my lay out and design. I think my color scheme is really good and my lay out is cool. I didn’t really know what info to include in my slide show. That was the hardest part. I succeeded in color scheme and the overall presentation, but some slides look kind of blank to me. I would have chose cars with more info about them if I was doing it again. I managed my time well, so I got it done on time. I the first part of the project it was kind of slow picking out a car. It was hard to show the meaning of the project because I didn’t have a lot of information. Overall, I thought this project was pretty fun.
Your PowerPoint had bright colors and little details involved. The fonts and effects that you used were cool. They really popped out at you. I liked that the cars would drive on the screen and go out. I think that if you used more information about the car your parents would love to give you the car that you wanted. Your voice was good. If you made your voice more exciting it would make it that much better. It was clear and nice. One thing that you could have worked on to improve your PowerPoint is providing some more information about each car. You did awesome though.
Three things I liked about your PowerPoint are the colors, voice, and the custom animation. I liked the colors because they were bright and helped you pay attention to the presentation easier, your voice because it was nice and clear, and you didn’t have to listen carefully to tell what you were saying, and the custom animation because it went well with whatever was on the slide. I think the project accomplished the purpose pretty well, but you could have included some more information to really show your parents that you are ready to buy a car. One thing I would change about the PowerPoint is to make the color scheme go along with the slides better. For example, in slide 13, all you had was a washed-out picture with pink text, and those two colors don’t go well together. Overall, I would say this was a good PowerPoint, and I hope you get a good grade on it.
Phoebe, I think you did a phenomenal job on you slide show. The timing for the animations was perfect. I also loved how the color scheme you used it fit with your personality and the colors of the cars. The one thing I think you could have done differently would be not to read the information right of the slide (that’s ok I did the same thing). Overall though I think you did a great job and it looks like you put a lot of work into it. I think that you would defiantly convince your parents to let you get the Mini Cooper. Again great job.
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Your power point was well done. The animations were great. I like it when the cars would come in and go out. Also I liked the colors. They were really bright and cool. The bright made me more interested and paid attention more. There are some things you could work on. The first thing is as the words come up you are reading them. You could talk about something else when we are reading. Also the colors were good but the color scheme did not match that well. But over all the power point, the voice, and the four cars were well put together. That was a great power point.
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I made my project’s title interesting by using bright colors and thick lines around the pictures. I liked my brochure, but it was hard to figure out what to put on it, but I feel my lay out and color scheme were good. I liked using power point because there are many possibilities and ways to make a cool power point. I used lots of color while still keeping the color scheme looking good. I think custom animation and clip art made my power point look a lot better too. I used animation to add fun and clip art to help the color scheme. I didn’t like narrating the power point because I didn’t know what to say about the cars. I like my lay out and design. I think my color scheme is really good and my lay out is cool. I didn’t really know what info to include in my slide show. That was the hardest part. I succeeded in color scheme and the overall presentation, but some slides look kind of blank to me. I would have chose cars with more info about them if I was doing it again. I managed my time well, so I got it done on time. I the first part of the project it was kind of slow picking out a car. It was hard to show the meaning of the project because I didn’t have a lot of information. Overall, I thought this project was pretty fun.
Your PowerPoint had bright colors and little details involved. The fonts and effects that you used were cool. They really popped out at you. I liked that the cars would drive on the screen and go out. I think that if you used more information about the car your parents would love to give you the car that you wanted. Your voice was good. If you made your voice more exciting it would make it that much better. It was clear and nice. One thing that you could have worked on to improve your PowerPoint is providing some more information about each car. You did awesome though.
Three things I liked about your PowerPoint are the colors, voice, and the custom animation. I liked the colors because they were bright and helped you pay attention to the presentation easier, your voice because it was nice and clear, and you didn’t have to listen carefully to tell what you were saying, and the custom animation because it went well with whatever was on the slide. I think the project accomplished the purpose pretty well, but you could have included some more information to really show your parents that you are ready to buy a car. One thing I would change about the PowerPoint is to make the color scheme go along with the slides better. For example, in slide 13, all you had was a washed-out picture with pink text, and those two colors don’t go well together. Overall, I would say this was a good PowerPoint, and I hope you get a good grade on it.
Phoebe, I think you did a phenomenal job on you slide show. The timing for the animations was perfect. I also loved how the color scheme you used it fit with your personality and the colors of the cars. The one thing I think you could have done differently would be not to read the information right of the slide (that’s ok I did the same thing). Overall though I think you did a great job and it looks like you put a lot of work into it. I think that you would defiantly convince your parents to let you get the Mini Cooper. Again great job.
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