Kyle, I certainly liked the transition; the existentiality of this project was absolutely comprehendible. Also, the color schemes were kind of OK. Your Clipart pics were great. However, I didn’t really understand why you didn’t make a visual presentation. Your cars didn’t exactly appeal to me, and they might not have been from eBay. The color schemes on your info slides didn’t really go with the four cars that you selected. I also noticed your cars didn’t have picture or title slides. Other than those multiple reasons, I thought your Car Webquest was really exciting, but it also needs improvement.
Kyle I thought that your power point was ok. What I like most is your voice was loud. Your information is good on slides 7, 8,9,10. I also like your animation on all the slides. I thought that your power point idea kind of but not all of it because it said that I was suppose to get the car and the whole point of the project is for you to be able to buy the car not us. You voice was loud but it was too loud I could not understand you at all. some things that you can improve on are don’t speak so loud make more sense with your slide and don’t gat off topic so much.
I liked the 1st slide because it had cool custom animation and the color scheme was very cool and made sense. The table of contents was pretty cool I liked how you used the custom animation and the narration was pretty pretty cool. I really liked your last slide, your credits slide, it was very cool and the custom animation was very good. Not to mention the pictures. I DEFINETLY DO NOT think that it met the goal he didn’t choose the cars from Ebay he didn’t want any of the cars he said “Which car should YOU get.” and it’s supposed to be which car should I get. I couldn’t here anything and he was very loud and off topic talked way to much and it was distracting from the powerpoint. He could improve in just about every where.
Kierra B. I really liked your presentation! It was extremely cool. I think the audio really added to it and made it much more interesting. I really liked all of the animation too, it really captured my attention. I really liked the pictures you added, like the smiley faces. They were cute and made me smile. But there was one thing i thought you could have worked on, and that was the color scheme. It was good but there were just a couple of slides that the colors really didn't go. But over all I thought you did a really great job!!!!! Nice work.
Making my intro and title slide was pretty easy. With my Title Slide I had the pictures of my four cars and at the beginning I really wanted to add some motion paths to the pictures when they entered. But, since it looked a little to complicate once it was done I just decided to go with some fade once it entered. My story slide was also pretty simple, I just wrote my story and had it sort of scroll in. The backgrounds on both of these slides are based off of the colors from all four of my cars because three of my cars are red and one is black/blue. My brochure was really fun to make. I went with the color scheme of black and pink and I’m really happy about how it turned out. The layout and design was really fun, because at the end there was space at the bottom so I just added some random stars and made them the right colors. My experience in power point was pretty good. The color scheme either went with the color of the four cars or on the features slides I took two colors out of the car it self (in Photoshop) and made the words and dots those colors. Now that I look back I really didn’t add so much real cool animation, but I like how it’s simple. I have to say that I HATED doing the audio narration. (And I bet Lauren was sick of hearing me say it a million times.) The idea was cool, but with mine I kept messing up half way threw and had to keep recording it over and over again until I finally did a half way decent one. I’m almost pretty sure that I could cut out parts of the audio and add new ones…But oh well. The most difficult part of this project for me was definitely the narration. I would read things wrong if I was reading them off of the slide or I would just kind of say them wrong.
Three things I liked about your presentation where the table of contents, the tables on slides 7, 8, 9 and 10, and the custom animation. The custom animation on your credits slide was pretty cool because you had a lot of things coming and going and the guy in the car “talking” at the end. Although you had a very good PowerPoint it didn’t seem like you where trying to convince your parents you where ready for a car. Your audio was very loud but at some parts it was hard to hear what you where saying. The most important thing you could’ve done to improve your project would’ve been to add more information and pictures on the car slides. Good job on your PowerPoint!
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Kyle, I certainly liked the transition; the existentiality of this project was absolutely comprehendible. Also, the color schemes were kind of OK. Your Clipart pics were great. However, I didn’t really understand why you didn’t make a visual presentation. Your cars didn’t exactly appeal to me, and they might not have been from eBay. The color schemes on your info slides didn’t really go with the four cars that you selected. I also noticed your cars didn’t have picture or title slides. Other than those multiple reasons, I thought your Car Webquest was really exciting, but it also needs improvement.
Kyle I thought that your power point was ok. What I like most is your voice was loud. Your information is good on slides 7, 8,9,10. I also like your animation on all the slides. I thought that your power point idea kind of but not all of it because it said that I was suppose to get the car and the whole point of the project is for you to be able to buy the car not us. You voice was loud but it was too loud I could not understand you at all. some things that you can improve on are don’t speak so loud make more sense with your slide and don’t gat off topic so much.
I liked the 1st slide because it had cool custom animation and the color scheme was very cool and made sense. The table of contents was pretty cool I liked how you used the custom animation and the narration was pretty pretty cool. I really liked your last slide, your credits slide, it was very cool and the custom animation was very good. Not to mention the pictures. I DEFINETLY DO NOT think that it met the goal he didn’t choose the cars from Ebay he didn’t want any of the cars he said “Which car should YOU get.” and it’s supposed to be which car should I get. I couldn’t here anything and he was very loud and off topic talked way to much and it was distracting from the powerpoint. He could improve in just about every where.
Kierra B.
I really liked your presentation! It was extremely cool. I think the audio really added to it and made it much more interesting. I really liked all of the animation too, it really captured my attention. I really liked the pictures you added, like the smiley faces. They were cute and made me smile. But there was one thing i thought you could have worked on, and that was the color scheme. It was good but there were just a couple of slides that the colors really didn't go. But over all I thought you did a really great job!!!!! Nice work.
Making my intro and title slide was pretty easy. With my Title Slide I had the pictures of my four cars and at the beginning I really wanted to add some motion paths to the pictures when they entered. But, since it looked a little to complicate once it was done I just decided to go with some fade once it entered. My story slide was also pretty simple, I just wrote my story and had it sort of scroll in. The backgrounds on both of these slides are based off of the colors from all four of my cars because three of my cars are red and one is black/blue. My brochure was really fun to make. I went with the color scheme of black and pink and I’m really happy about how it turned out. The layout and design was really fun, because at the end there was space at the bottom so I just added some random stars and made them the right colors. My experience in power point was pretty good. The color scheme either went with the color of the four cars or on the features slides I took two colors out of the car it self (in Photoshop) and made the words and dots those colors. Now that I look back I really didn’t add so much real cool animation, but I like how it’s simple. I have to say that I HATED doing the audio narration. (And I bet Lauren was sick of hearing me say it a million times.) The idea was cool, but with mine I kept messing up half way threw and had to keep recording it over and over again until I finally did a half way decent one. I’m almost pretty sure that I could cut out parts of the audio and add new ones…But oh well. The most difficult part of this project for me was definitely the narration. I would read things wrong if I was reading them off of the slide or I would just kind of say them wrong.
Three things I liked about your presentation where the table of contents, the tables on slides 7, 8, 9 and 10, and the custom animation. The custom animation on your credits slide was pretty cool because you had a lot of things coming and going and the guy in the car “talking” at the end. Although you had a very good PowerPoint it didn’t seem like you where trying to convince your parents you where ready for a car. Your audio was very loud but at some parts it was hard to hear what you where saying. The most important thing you could’ve done to improve your project would’ve been to add more information and pictures on the car slides. Good job on your PowerPoint!
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